Sunday, June 10, 2007

The Smallest Touch Comments

Rating: 4.5

The smallest touch,
Made my heart race,
My chest pound.
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Frankie Stones
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Meredith Barr 22 August 2007

Like this Frankie. Like it a lot. Often can say the most with the least words. Keep writing at all costs.

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Surabhi Malik 22 August 2007

very concise and beautiful!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 August 2007

Excellent romantic poem Frankie...10

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Donall Dempsey 20 August 2007

Love this Frankie! Totally agree with what you're saying. Love the repeating of the phrase as it builds and builds and builds up...driving the point home. With the smallest of touches you say so much and say it so well. Beautiful poem! love Donall

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