Tuesday, February 18, 2014

The Small Things In Life Comments

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It's the little things in life that matter the most
Those things stay with your heart very close

It can brighten a frown to a smile
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Lyndsay Thomas
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A positive and powerful perspective my friend. Well done.

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Bri Edwards 26 February 2014

Lyndsay, It can brighten a frown to a smile And make someone's day worth whiled ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; might i suggest they [referring to things] can brighten, ........ and.................... worth while? and These small acts of kindness keeps the world go round Gods in the sky and were all on the ground how about acts.....keep? and world going and God's and we're but except for such grammatical errors, i liked the poem. it has a great message which, if taken to heart by all would make the world much more pleasant. [you may have reached a bit to find a rhyme for hard.....hard/card. rather than forcing a rhyme with card, it would be alright, i think, to not have a rhyme here.] thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Lyndsay Thomas

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