She walked the flatlands
with the sincerity of a dullard
when her thoughts crumbled..
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I really liked this poem it reminded me of the fact that sometimes when I'm just walking down the road always on my own some embarrassing momment flashes to mind and I think what did I do that for
A poem expresing poignance. Kudos for the way u hav pennd it. Nice to read u again sally.
Your poem is well done, and meaningfull. It shows her angst but it makes me want to know why.
Thanks for your comment, Andy.Much appreciated.