Monday, April 24, 2006

The Slotmachine Comments

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I wish I were a slotmachine
inside a fancy club
All chrome and colours to be seen
the pride of any pub.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 24 April 2006

A fun poem Herbert. I like the parallel you use between the call-girls and the slot machines. Great poem. sincerely, Mary

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Danny Reynolds 24 April 2006

Hold the gold bars.(Nudge nudge.) Thoroughly enjoyable. Danny

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Gina Onyemaechi 24 April 2006

Light and bouncy. G.

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