Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The Slip Comments

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During deep discussion it slipped out;
the tiger long caged, the skeleton in the closet.
A secret so hidden, it's cobwebbed form
floated unheard for seconds.
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Mimi Brown 13 October 2009

Ian, to tell you more would inhibit your wonderful imagination from doing what it will with the words presented... I was reading your poems this morning and felt inspired to write a poem of my own...Thanks for the comment, it is, as always appreciated..Mimi

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Ian Bowen 13 October 2009

Mimi, fancy leaving me up in the air like that. Please, tell me more. Well written as always.10/10 Regards, Ian

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