Lalleshwari

Lalleshwari

Pandrethan, Srinagar, Kashmir / India
Friday, July 13, 2012

The Sling Knots Of The Load Of Candy Comments

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The sling knots of the load of candy.
Loosened;
My bony frame bent
Into a bow;
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Susan Williams 13 January 2016

I believe he felt the need to redo this poem. It's a close call but I think I like The Sling of My Candy Load Has Gone Loose better. I wonder, though, why he returned to this to redo it. Perhaps he wanted to put it to music?

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Pandrethan, Srinagar, Kashmir / India
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