Tuesday, June 22, 2021

The Slick City Streets Comments

Rating: 5.0

Recent rain has fallen on the slick city streets,
And redbird has suddenly abandoned the fast life!
Downtown still throbs with the city's heartbeats,
Like vast fields, in the time of red butterflies.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
COMMENTS
Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

You are full of inspiration! Great poem once again!

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M Asim Nehal 24 June 2021

Monsoon season is back with raindrops. Nice poem with great imageries.5**

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 June 2021

This poem hss rendered without speech Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 June 2021

Cont...A poem embellished with lovely rhyme and flow. Excellent write

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 June 2021

City's life has been beautifully painted on the canvas of this marvelous write.

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Varsha M 22 June 2021

Worthy imagery of cuty drenched in rain though abandoned is still the heartbeat. Like the field full of love in it. Beautiful poetry. Beautiful imagery woven.

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