Wednesday, January 9, 2008

The Sleepless Night Of Yesterday Was So Full Of You Comments

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The sleepless night of yesterday was so full of you…..
It felt so right to touch your hand once more in that dim corner of mind
Nights spent staring at the full moon by the side of that corner window flashed back and your face danced on the heartbeat till the eyelids dropped to sleep.
I wonder how life would have been, if only you could listen to the words unsaid
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Richa Tiwari Joshi
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Shekhar Joshi 10 May 2009

All your poem reflects a lost love another beautiful but sad poem excellent piece

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Aasiq the poet 01 May 2008

beautiful and quite enjoyable...

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Shalini Sahni 21 April 2008

Hi, I think god has blessed you with the creativity and the sensetivity to put your feelings into apt words. This poem has been put into such words that not only can a person relate to it but it also gives life to all that has gone by........Continue the great work.

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Geetanjali Tuli 29 January 2008

Distance brings people closer and time should be used wisely to make memories. I like the line...We all move on but the moments of age freeze in the time less clock of life...good memories help a bad day end well. Ur poems remind me of my past. A past that was full of good and bad. And i feel nice to know that my thoughts have been put down in words. And now suddenly there's alot i dont feel bad abt becoz i am not the only one...keep writing

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V F 22 January 2008

what a sweet dreamy soul you have Richa! loved this one too..

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