The Sleep Walkers Comments

Many more to lose, In the black holes, of terrorism? Or the proxy wars! ..........nice plot....great work

A thoughtful write on current scenario. You have presented very beautiful poem on terrorism, pain and sufferings of people. Loved reading it.

By vested interests and religious and political fanatics, how many youngsters are trapped to become suicide bombers. How many mothers lose their sons! The story of the young man walking to the mouth of danger is so poignantly described.... Poverty prompts many to take up such drastic steps! To wipe out terrorism from the face of the Earth should be the self undertaken task of all governments! A powerful write!

A poem with a very strong message......................10

Its an Outstanding one definitely..... Superb! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10...

A mother is waiting for his son, Just two days ago, Really wonderful composition shared on. Definitely pleasing.

You have wonderfully brought out as to how terrorism inflict pain and loss in different ways all at the same time. I loved each and every line of the poem and especially these, to quote, Smell of gun powder, Polluted the water, Polluted the air, All beauty was lost! Thank you for sharing this poem.