Friday, October 2, 2015

The Slang Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pink top, blue eyes,
She mocks the girl that fakes smiles
Tells her, her slang's great,
Pun intended? no way!
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Meriam Joseph
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George J. Carroll 07 October 2015

She will catch on soon

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Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) 03 October 2015

So she let herself outcast, All in the name of her slang. I like it. nice work

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James Donovan 03 October 2015

Whenever difference is not tolerated, then prejudice and hatred take over.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 October 2015

Verily, the girl spoke informal words but what matters is her good character and nobility, A lovely rhyming verse with a good message, Loved reading it, Added to my poem list...................10

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2015

Original poem on such a nice topic, I liked it...10++ I invite you to read my poems, thanks.

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