Friday, March 8, 2019

The Sky Within... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon has left glowing
The sky above me is dark;
Within is darker...
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Devanshu Patel
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Aniruddha Pathak 12 March 2019

Within is darker. The darkness within is very well brought out.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2019

When there is no moon in sky, it seems to be very dark and the dark reflection floats around mind. A brilliant thought provoking poem is wisely penned.10

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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