Thursday, December 13, 2012

The Sky, Our Blanket Comments

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The sky, our blanket,
puts us to sleep,
drowns our eyes
with darkness
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen
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Prabir Gayen 16 May 2019

The sky, our blanket, greets us with smiles, opens our eyes to the new day and bids the sun to bathe us with her loving warmth...fine poem

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Bri Edwards 19 April 2015

and ever since 8th grade (about age 13 in u.s.) Latin class, i thought the sun was a guy! who knew? ! i liked it (the poem) . bri :)

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Thank you so much for your positive response, dear Bri Edwards!

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How are you and your writing. I think I have not managed to follow up responses. Now I spend time to review responses from co-poets.

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Kelvin Owusu 22 December 2012

a wonderful piece of poetry, gives such a nice sense of feeling

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Thanks for your response, Kelvin. It is always nice to be covered by a blanket by a mother.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 18 December 2012

Dear Thomas, thanks for your great supplement to what the sky can provide us. I do agree with you. Have a good evening and Merry Christmas to you.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 18 December 2012

Mirna, thanks for your positive response to this entry.

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Poetheart Morgan 14 December 2012

Sometimes feels more than understand. So this poem has all my affection and inner feelings so beautiful.

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Hi, Poetheart Morgan, sorry for responding only now. Thanks a lot for leaving a very nice response.

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Thanks, Morgan, for writing this response. Sorry for responding only now.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 14 December 2012

Thanks for your respone, dear Musfiq.

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Heather Wilson 14 December 2012

A beautiful poem to warm and brighten a rainy day.thank you.

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Thanks, Heather, for responding bringing the positive intention of this little poem.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 14 December 2012

nice imagery of mind.. beautiful...

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