Down and down
the sky comes.
The sky comes down
with its hollow blackness.
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I agree the old divine painting is a a monochrome, we have made painted from our preferred colors pictures of our own thoughts, but the cycle is continued and just a drop of nature will wash away all of our paintings. The canvas will be ready for a new love affair. But this is not the question, the question is whether we shall be included in the list of new painters or not? Whether some of us will be selected and some of us will be rejected? All religions say good painters will get another opportunity. What do you say Neela? Think and reply. You are a nice thinker and a nice poetess as well.
Well.At first thanks for leaving a thoughtful comment on this poem.Sir, I believe in readers' response theory.You have every right to throw light from your personal point of view.My opinion is that what appears interesting to Jack, may not attract Jim in the same way.This is not after all, a subjective poem.