Saturday, September 8, 2012

The Sky Above Comments

Rating: 3.5

There is none with you,
except the sky, the sun,
the moon, and persons few.
The road ahead, the stars,
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Neela Nath Das
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Thomas Hsi 15 September 2012

I really liked how you enjoyed getting into the celebration of nature.

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The magnitude of nothingness takes Him by surprise and the anxiety of the man amuses Him... Nature triumphs around us still

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Vipins Puthooran 09 September 2012

In your every poems, there'll be something that's related to nature.... It's a fine poem! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2012

Beautiful write Nila, keep it up writing something nice and awakening_Unwritten Soul

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Valerie Dohren 08 September 2012

Beautiful poem Nil, very descriptive and a celebration of nature.

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