Wednesday, March 24, 2010

The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked at myself, I looked at my pain
Thought if my life has gone all in vain
And while I was thinking and wondering why
With tears I looked at the deep blue sky
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Preetam Shetty
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A poem of sad despair, with the glimmer of hope at the end. The sky all encompassing, good and evil, seeing all. Really enjoyed your poem; D

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blank blank 21 May 2010

nice one preetam full of hope one more reason to try again and not despair from life thx for sharing

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Gita Ashok 20 May 2010

Sometimes it’s blue, sometimes it’s gray Sometimes it‘s night, sometimes it’s day Now I understood I should not wonder why I laughed and looked at the deep blue sky A very good comparison between shades of the sky and human emotions.

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