And the skies in yr eyes are
Never troubling
They are free as the wind
And I would want to feel it
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Good use of imagery. metaphor of 'sky' is very revealing.
Very touching poem, tad melancholic, but surely 5 Stars and to my favourites.!
The skies in your eyes...and my emotions dark....the poem is do beautiful. You made experience snd emotions flow like a water in te brook... enjoyed your every expression. Thank-you.
Wonderful depiction of a clean patch of sky...a poem of great philosophocal intensity... liked it.
A poem of great depth. Deeply moving and poignant. A well crafted write.
Such an excellent work.....thanks...