Friday, October 20, 2006

The Skeleton Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went exploring along the beach
And entered a deep dark cave
Torch on, I followed it to the end
Whereupon to my surprize
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Dee Daffodil 20 October 2006

Creepy! ! I love the ending...you write great spooky poems Marilyn! ! Hugs, Dee

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2006

AHHHH, LIKE THIS A LOT...DO I DETECT A POE-ESQUE FLAVOUR TO THIS WORK....MY PRIMARY INFLUENCE & GOD'S GIFT OF POETRY, AND THEN SOME..a fine job, here, Marilyn & THY SHALT ENDULGE THIS UTTERANCE....fOREVERMORE... ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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