Thursday, July 29, 2010

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Forgot the land of my birth,
naked and now,
in a land of my feelings.
Where i lay is a path between mecuric clouds and a bad frown.
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Simiwuna John lodam
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Marcus Mckinley 05 August 2010

there is no hidden truths when you are naked to the world. love is a vulnerable state we all face. well done.

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David Beckham 02 August 2010

really nice poem..I like the line, 'Until you open the door to the wounded leopard'...this is ultimate show of love. to accept an enemy' Great poem

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Simiwuna John lodam

Simiwuna John lodam

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