Sunday, August 18, 2013

The Sixth Sense In Your Pants Comments

Rating: 4.8

My eyes gaze upon you
Memorize every dip and angle
Know it all and say now forever
Deborah's seen your face
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2016

Slide into me baby. Protect me if In fear I cower. Slide right up above me. My very own watchtower. Come inside and burst free at the first sign of danger especially a perverted game. Cover me. Comfort me. With my frail hands I pinky swear the same. half eaten by wolves.. a desire for purity......... SLAY THE BEASTS: : : : : : liked all these at the end of the poem. sensual..... but somehow desiring for the innate purity. love this poem. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2014

A poem with an eye catching title, breath taking body and a quizzical note. Just loved reading it.

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Thomas Duncky 31 August 2013

Cuz I am half eaten by wolves. But I’m also still half pure and free. Love is easy. Just Slay the beasts. This is probably one of the rare poems I've ever read that are half explicit but telling the truth and yet not offensive in the smallest way. You are a real queen when it comes to this type of poetry Princess. I agree with Mark, this is a marvelous composition. Long but very readable and enjoyable. Truly and deeply loved this one.10/10

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Thomas Duncky 31 August 2013

Cuz I am half eaten by wolves. But I’m also still half pure and free. Love is easy. Just Slay the beasts. This is probably one of the rare poems I've ever read that are half explicit but telling the truth and yet not offensive in the smallest way. You are a real queen when it comes to this type of poetry Princess. I agree with Mark, this is a marvelous composition. Long but very readable and enjoyable. Truly and deeply loved this one.10/10

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Saadat Tahir 20 August 2013

stunningly beautiful crescendo... finish me, finish you, we fingered just truth…. Cuz I am half eaten by wolves. But I’m also still half pure and free. Love is easy. Just Slay the beasts. Living inside us are humans. And Sorry is a word with a long pretty history. We live from the outside in or maybe inside out But always inside. Life tastes sweet. well conceived...well written.... no holds bared and audacious liked on poetic merit....

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Mark Dillon 18 August 2013

A great composition, thanks for sharing.

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