The Sisters Comments

Lovely piece......wonderful to read.....thank u, dear poetess......anjandev roy.

Honest words. Life is weird. What we lost in relationships is often very difficult to retrieve. Liked your good mind good thoughts, a bit confessing though. Good poem Rose Marie 10+

Sometimes I hide/Just to be by myself/Away from her/But she is like a mushroom/That sprouts/Anywhere overnight.....this tender expression touches my heart! A great write!

Envy you to have a good sister, take care of her

Sometimes I hide Just to be by myself Away from her//// this is the introductory of great kindness

She adored Everything I got From the sole of my feet To the top of my head. to turn the time back to be with her...... lovely poem of deep love for your beloved one. tony

...I could turn back The hands of time... What words! No one can erase it. These are the words of the gods. Great.

Innocence is divine, and even moments of self sound sweet. An elder sister say at twelve to one about one year is ten times her wisdom. Yet, the same difference in age when she is sat fifteen makes a different picture. The piece draws a very immaculate portrait. I liked what I read.

She is very much like me Wrapped in a different body She adored Everything I got From the sole of my feet To the top of my head.........love and affection flows here deeply. A brilliant penning really.

She suffered in silence My tenderhearted lash and pinch And all the treacheries I committed She idolized and loved me....but she changed completely. life and its characteristics. change. you have envisioned it and taught es about the possibilities of change in life.... thank u dear poetess. tony

....... yet I am sure, there is an inalienable bond between the two of you! The love siblings have, though might wane at times, cannot be taken away for ever. So you can stay confident at the thought that you'll be able to reinstate the attachment you had once though it is foolish to expect her to follow you like 'a dog after its master'! Interesting read!

And now I always wish I could turn back The hands of time And be with my sister All the time.........so impressive. I love these lines. It is really a beautiful poem which has a special attraction to visit once again.

Wonderful sketch! My pleasure reading it time and again dear Rose! I always admire the lucidity of your poetic expression! Your poems are so simple but beautiful!

TWO: Thank you for sharing this family jewel. Your poem is as precious as the most expensive jewel. With melancholy you are thinking back to these days, saddest truth. Thank you for this profound poem and prolific write/A 10++++++++++for the vote.

ONE: A loveliest poem about your sisters, especially about your youngest sister. It's oft like that when teenage time comes, a radical change takes place. IF I may say the grow hormones are starting to work hardest. A most valuable poem for the family archives to read time and again, Mrs. Juan-Austin.

The hands of time! Thanks for sharing.

A beautiful poetic sketch of a younger sister.

It's a lovely poem Rose! Liked the last three lines of the first stanza most! Thanks for sharing......10

She is very much like me Wrapped in a different body She adored Everything I got From the sole of my feet To the top of my head..... excellently done, thanks for sharing the poem with us

Sister followed you everywhere with much love and affection. You always wished the best for her. A nicely penned memorable affectionate poem this is...10