Monday, November 17, 2014

The Sinner Comments

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The sinner
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I heard him whisper
I am a sinner
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Amitava Sur 19 November 2014

Mostly we all commit some sins (big or small) compromising ourselves and the very next moment we camouflage and pretend to be clean. But by this process, ultimately we remain guilty and belittled to our conscience. Hence to come out from sinful activities, only our self awareness can help us to rectify, nothing else...... a good eye opener in deed

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Dinesan Madathil 18 November 2014

In a large world of sinners you need not identify yourself someone with the identity of the tribe..... We always cleanse ourselves somehow and there is absolute contentment attained thus.... Being indebted to God is your domain and if it instills any strength in you, you have to keep it up Pattanayakji.

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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

every sinner wear a mask to cover the self....beautiful poem.....

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Valsa George 17 November 2014

This self awareness is the easiest route to correction and redemption! To some extent, we are all sinners and many a time we camouflage our true self through deception! Only thing, the degree of sinfulness varies from person to person! A great write on the confession of a repentant soul!

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Marieta Maglas 17 November 2014

Beautiful poem, Enjoyed reading it. Voted 10.

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