Monday, December 21, 2020

The Sinking Ship Comments

Rating: 5.0

How will the pages of history
Be filled for 2020 Britain
For us it's still a mystery
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 December 2020

In this time of uncertainty, we need a strong, competent and intelligent leader that will man our ship and keep it afloat. The world is at the brink of sinking, one false move and we will go down to the bottom. A very perceptive poem. Wonderful thoughts worth to ponder about. Very well written. Five Stars! ! ! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 21 December 2020

'Hit hard and now out of shape' - a poet's vision gives such a fitting description, as also in 'On daily banana skins do they slip'! Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. The poem gets the maximum rating from me- 5 Stars*****!

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