The Sinister Shadow Comments

Good poem. Yes, I like it very much........

This is somehow very interesting, not only you tried to recapture the true meaning of dejection but you transferred the later meaning in a very Gothic approach. I'm not doubting that there is in any way a hidden meaning and a very fine target thoroughly mentioned in this poem. Good job, keep on writing. :)

the shadow can copy everything of me, even the smoke but he can not copy the fire and the fire which is inside me, he willingly suppress the fire...and more take the philosophical meaning of shadow....then the meaning of the poem is clear.

Yes, Dejection makes a person think negative. Your poem is very nice.

Your shadow up to cigar is o k Then you give sinister design to your shadow and want to covey something. Your shadow philosophy is not clear to me Wahap -KAVIN CHARALAN

a little too dark for my taste......but some very good thoughts.....i liked the first two paras immensely.

An interesting concept and some nice imagery.

Brilliant poem! You're gifted and you're poems are outstanding we look forward to more of yur magnificent offerings.Wishing you the best.Thank you very much.

a well conceived and well worded poem. thanks

This is interesting. So the shadow is the darker side of it all portraid here. One of Freauds contituants Jyung I think it was said something like we should explore our darker side to find our full self. So here you glow to rid yourself of the darker side. Does the you walking have a darker side or was it dismissed with the shadow. I like this poem it brings some new thoughts to mind. Thank you for inviteing me to read

Thank you....I enjoyed it very much very good

''what if shadow deceives? '....we have to blaze or glow.

stoics or introverts...or people who are not gregarious by nature like their own company, , , under their own shadow...such topic has always been favorite among poets...miss dickinson's...my soul selects her own society..is an example, though a bit different...but...what if shadow deceives....? ? ?

Nice poem. Good imagination, but you could have avoided the ring part, because smoking is injurious to health and you might have used incense or something of that sort. I really enjoyed the concept of this poem..

Very well written indeed, and with a nice rhyme. Excellent job, my friend.

wow, good mystic story.) I like such poems where a poet looks at himself from another side))) i like you style of writing and hope i`ll enjoy your poems for a long time))) keep it up

I love this, a really great poem, a great write.