Friday, September 11, 2020

The Sinister Chain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ego, false vanity and self pride
Provoke contempt and disrespect,
That, in no time turns into malice,
Malevolence, envy and spite,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Varsha M 01 October 2020

True words. But humans have Quality for transendence that wins every moment of life and guides path of eternal peace.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

@Varsha M, Thanks for visiting my poem and the thoughtful comment you left here.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Seld Pride destroys everything! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2020

You are right that anger diminishes intellect and sallows our sense. Even if it burns our all good virtues. In Shrimad Bhagavad Geeta Chapter - 2, Shloka No 63 it has been well illustrated...Krodhat bhavati samihah, samohat srmuti bibhramah / Smruti bhransad buddhinasho buddhinasat pranashyati. At the end it can take to death. A marvelous poem with lofty theme.10

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Samantha 12 September 2020

I really like this one. Straight forward. Short and sweet.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2020

Ego The cruel prison cell of common sense Humanity lives there as a jailbird guilty

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Valsa George 12 September 2020

Hatred leads to anger and uncontrolled anger numbs our senses and finally decimates our reason completely! With this man stoops to the level of a wild beast and indulges in all sorts of wickedness, marring all his good deeds and killing his soul! From this state, he can never hope for a regeneration. Profound thoughts are unveiled through this poem

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Kevin Patrick 11 September 2020

Only phoenix can reincarnate From ashes; Human souls cannot. Better then the sentiment the greatest philosophers and religious icons, anger is the cancer of the souls light. A great poem!

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Sandra Feldman 11 September 2020

A wonderful poetic resume' of the worst within us! If only more people would realize the destructive effects of hate and anger, a better place this would be. You can't redeem your soul once burned by destructive hate, And yet, evil is practised over ad over again to the detriment of so many. A fantastic poem that says so much with very few but selected words. Exceptional!

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

'You can't redeem your soul once burned by destructive hate' - absolutely true! Thank you Sandra, for your thoughtful comment and high appreciation of the poem. Much inspired.

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 September 2020

May Allah SWT jeep us safe from such distructive emotions. A thought provoking poem.10++

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

Thank you Arzoo, for visiting and the time given. Much inspired by your appreciation and the generous rating.

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