Thursday, March 22, 2012

The Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

An offspring of the sin you were too.
Kindly you smiled
whilst furtively charmed me within this sinful world.
Now I,  the supreme sin's indulgence,
...
Read full text

Besa Dede
COMMENTS
Kevin Patrick 28 March 2012

I think its about the measures of hypocritical nature of people, sin is universal yet its pawned off to others though we freely commit acts ourselves. Nice layers of intrigue in such short verse

3 0 Reply
R.k Das 22 March 2012

very very insightful poem, sin has spread it tentacles, none can escape, thanx

3 0 Reply
Close
Error Success