Wednesday, August 11, 2010

((The Simple Love)) Comments

Rating: ★2.7

My love sorry if I'could not gave you the first diamond.
Was difficult like me to bring the moon to your lap.
I'only had the love and loyalty.
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loyalty solitude sorry
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Kevin Carney 12 August 2010

Nice write, I like the line (was it difficult to bring the moon to your lap) . I like this very much.

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