Friday, February 8, 2008

The Silver Valley Comments

Rating: 4.8

Relating to the silver valley here is not my
cup of tea, I dont welcome the excess bagage
that mother of nature has given me
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Bonnie Collins
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Duh Huh 27 July 2009

Wow Bonnie. I like how you wrapped me up right into the poem. I was mesmerized and didnt stop till i finished reading and then went back for more. Love it and the ending is a twister :) thanks for sharing your talent with us my friend :)

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Kesav Easwaran 14 December 2008

wonderful ending line, Bonnie...looks innocent witty yet smart and meaningful...good piece...thanks for sharing your nice views...10

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Robert Sheridan 17 September 2008

Bonnie, Once again, you have painted another exceptional piece of prose - one that bursts of color, flowing words, and meaning. Outstanding! Robert

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Craig Anderson 23 March 2008

Wow..so much crammed into so little. But an eye-opener to the money hungry diet companies. Excellent educational read Bonnie. Regards Craig.

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Bonnie Collins

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Middletown New York
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