Tuesday, February 7, 2012

The Silver Bridge Cryptid Comments

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A night with black clouds, eminent, foreboding;
a wind filled with snow and arrows of ice
through which flew on massive wings
the Silver Bridge cryptid with ruby-red eyes.
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John M. Marshall
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Alicia Patti 07 February 2012

First off, you need to change the word 'eminent' to imminent.' That said, this is a marvelous poem, truly spectral with fantastic imagery. I can see it all happen. Well done!

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John M. Marshall

John M. Marshall

Wilmington, NC
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