A night with black clouds, eminent, foreboding;
a wind filled with snow and arrows of ice
through which flew on massive wings
the Silver Bridge cryptid with ruby-red eyes.
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First off, you need to change the word 'eminent' to imminent.' That said, this is a marvelous poem, truly spectral with fantastic imagery. I can see it all happen. Well done!
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First off, you need to change the word 'eminent' to imminent.' That said, this is a marvelous poem, truly spectral with fantastic imagery. I can see it all happen. Well done!