Saturday, October 11, 2008

The Silica And The Sand Comments

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From beyond the multi-cultural throng
Weaving and waddling its ponderous way past
Like some monstrous, badly-dressed, be-sunglassed millipede,
Its middle hunched and bunched up,
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Tony Jolley
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Kevin Wells 19 October 2008

Hey tony My PC is throwing a wobbly so I don't know if the original message I posted got to you Nils desperandum...not to mention Nils Lofgren. Just to say (once again) I loved this. Completely original and extremely clever. Typically 'Jolleyesque'

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Fay Slimm 13 October 2008

Incredible Tony - what a mind you have! ! this is a product of a real writer. congratulations in telling such an absorbing tale and making every line fascinating enough to glue the reader, as a pure sentamentalist might have tried to glue the broken glass. Personification is an ability so few possess with credibility, but the reader will be absorbed, as I was, in the glass's adventures and loves.Loved your final line.....10 ++++ from Fay.

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