I climbed a Hill
When light and dark were fighting
Where there were no people around
Only the grass, touch me not
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This is so powerful and heart moving! .. An ever so wonderful way to release! ..
Something drew me to this poem again. It may be simple spontaneous expressions, may be its forthrightness, whatever, but poem is deeply appealing, it touches the inner cord and jells with your being. It is more beautiful than I thought earlier.
(4) I have truly enjoyed your magnificent poem, and its content shows how great you truly are. This poem in its own way has brightened my day, must I say. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Wonderous Blessings be upon thee and your beloved family..
(3) This marvelous poem goes to MyPoemList. A powerfully worded poem, one of your very best and one I admired most (to be honest, I admire many of your poems) , dear Mrs. Juan- Austin. I am also happy to be back again from the tropical Thailand, since I do miss my favourites on Poem Hunter Poems Site. To have started reading your poems to add my comments and other responses, is a great relief for me. (to have started)
(2) An excellent poem through and through What I do not agree is the fact that your last line is: ...........Of my weakness............... Surely not, my dear great poetess! This is YOUR STRENGTH, really! You are so decent that you will never shout in public, I am sure. As we are human beings, we want to empty our inside full of hurtful things the best option you ever did was going uphills like you described in your poem
(1) When you submitted this poem, I was away for a fortnight to Thailand (to my grandson, Mrs. Juan-Austin, so I am behind with my responses. to your excellent poems I am so sorry for that. After having read this beautiful poem, a certain sadness overcame my being. The reason is, I must admit that this poem shows greatest strength. This is a powerful poem, one of your best, I am sure.
Sometimes in Silence, we are at our best. Thank you, dear Poets for being with me in my thoughts.
The witness is silent but face expressions narrate the entire story. Great Poem.
above above the everything I cannot reach silently but; awe, not as zombie not as smashes chewing grass no, no, not as nothing above me and everything there the silent witness can ping the lives' bing......///
One of the best poems by Rose Marie Juan Austin, her thinking and imagination is at the peak, she can now understand the hidden bitter truths of this endless universe, she now changes her philosophic thoughts in great poems like this.
432/500 CONGRATS POETESS THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING MINE MOMS SMILES
This was an outstanding poem! I enjoyed reading every single line- thank you for sharing.
Yes this is all about life you are witnessed silently by the forces distant from you......the way of presentation is very outstanding.....unto my all time favorite list....10++++++++
Here at the Hill Where the stars are nearer No one is hurt The Sky The Hill Are the silent witnesses Of my weakness....very sweet poem..love it dear friend///
All hurts that lingered And lurked inside my heart......splendid poem. anjandev roy.
So much beauty and strength is contained in this sterling piece of writing. A gem of a piece with peace and serenity flowing through each verse. Mingling of human emotions with nature comes so naturally and beautifully that reader is smitten at first reading. A sure 10.
Here at the Hill/I poured my heart out/All hurts that lingered/And lurked inside my heart...I sincerely admire the profound depth of expression....a brilliant work! Keep it up.......God bless you!
This silent witness can ease the pain inside. This wonderful poem somehow teaches humans to be in control even if they are frustrated and angry. I love tnis poem, dear ate Rose.....10++++++
When light and dark were fighting... Yet slowly the fiery colors Were subdued by black.... as silent witnesses... and that is where I poured my heart out, hurts and all, ... marvelous expressions, and a lovely poem, RM.
Beautifully inspirational! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++