Wednesday, July 24, 2019

The Silent Witness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I climbed a Hill
When light and dark were fighting
Where there were no people around
Only the grass, touch me not
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 15 February 2023

Beautifully inspirational! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 15 February 2023

This is so powerful and heart moving! .. An ever so wonderful way to release! ..

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 October 2019

Something drew me to this poem again. It may be simple spontaneous expressions, may be its forthrightness, whatever, but poem is deeply appealing, it touches the inner cord and jells with your being. It is more beautiful than I thought earlier.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

(4) I have truly enjoyed your magnificent poem, and its content shows how great you truly are. This poem in its own way has brightened my day, must I say. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Wonderous Blessings be upon thee and your beloved family..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

(3) This marvelous poem goes to MyPoemList. A powerfully worded poem, one of your very best and one I admired most (to be honest, I admire many of your poems) , dear Mrs. Juan- Austin. I am also happy to be back again from the tropical Thailand, since I do miss my favourites on Poem Hunter Poems Site. To have started reading your poems to add my comments and other responses, is a great relief for me. (to have started)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

(2) An excellent poem through and through What I do not agree is the fact that your last line is: ...........Of my weakness............... Surely not, my dear great poetess! This is YOUR STRENGTH, really! You are so decent that you will never shout in public, I am sure. As we are human beings, we want to empty our inside full of hurtful things the best option you ever did was going uphills like you described in your poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

(1) When you submitted this poem, I was away for a fortnight to Thailand (to my grandson, Mrs. Juan-Austin, so I am behind with my responses. to your excellent poems I am so sorry for that. After having read this beautiful poem, a certain sadness overcame my being. The reason is, I must admit that this poem shows greatest strength. This is a powerful poem, one of your best, I am sure.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2019

Sometimes in Silence, we are at our best. Thank you, dear Poets for being with me in my thoughts.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2019

The witness is silent but face expressions narrate the entire story. Great Poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 August 2019

above above the everything I cannot reach silently but; awe, not as zombie not as smashes chewing grass no, no, not as nothing above me and everything there the silent witness can ping the lives' bing......///

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Akhtar Jawad 01 August 2019

One of the best poems by Rose Marie Juan Austin, her thinking and imagination is at the peak, she can now understand the hidden bitter truths of this endless universe, she now changes her philosophic thoughts in great poems like this.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 July 2019

432/500 CONGRATS POETESS THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING MINE MOMS SMILES

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Bryony Sheldon 30 July 2019

This was an outstanding poem! I enjoyed reading every single line- thank you for sharing.

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Yes this is all about life you are witnessed silently by the forces distant from you......the way of presentation is very outstanding.....unto my all time favorite list....10++++++++

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Prabir Gayen 26 July 2019

Here at the Hill Where the stars are nearer No one is hurt The Sky The Hill Are the silent witnesses Of my weakness....very sweet poem..love it dear friend///

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Anjandev Roy 26 July 2019

All hurts that lingered And lurked inside my heart......splendid poem. anjandev roy.

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Nosheen Irfan 26 July 2019

So much beauty and strength is contained in this sterling piece of writing. A gem of a piece with peace and serenity flowing through each verse. Mingling of human emotions with nature comes so naturally and beautifully that reader is smitten at first reading. A sure 10.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2019

Here at the Hill/I poured my heart out/All hurts that lingered/And lurked inside my heart...I sincerely admire the profound depth of expression....a brilliant work! Keep it up.......God bless you!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2019

This silent witness can ease the pain inside. This wonderful poem somehow teaches humans to be in control even if they are frustrated and angry. I love tnis poem, dear ate Rose.....10++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 July 2019

When light and dark were fighting... Yet slowly the fiery colors Were subdued by black.... as silent witnesses... and that is where I poured my heart out, hurts and all, ... marvelous expressions, and a lovely poem, RM.

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