I love her dearly,
And long to tell her how I feel.
For so many years of her life,
I remained silent,
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That was a great 1. It actually made me cry too. You rock, from Rissa: -)
This is so tear- jerking Beautiful in its nature and I certainly love the theme Bless you for this one Sorry but we only go up to ten on this site Love duncan XXX
Oh my gosh Dee! This gave me such a lump in my throat....(and having my tonsils removed a week and a half ago...that's not a good thing!) What a beautifully sad poem! I sometimes like to think my dad watches me and can see my kids and the life I've made. I hope so. You put into words what so many of us hope for. Beautiful. Sincerely, Mary
Beautfully written in loving memory of 'Mom.' I felt my own mother hovering near as I read this one. Thanks, Dee.
DEE...TIME, DESIRE&OPPORTUNITY WILL ALL TOUCH THE SAME POINT... JUST BE THERE WHEN IT HAPPENS...A MOST BEAUTFUL PIECE INDEED PASSION & YOUR NATURAL GIFT MAKES FOR A SADLY PERFECT READ STELLAR USE OF IMAGERY...SMOOTH RIVER-FLOW FROM PEEK TO VALLEY....NICE WORK DEE! '''''''''FRANK
This just made me sit and shed a tear. What can I say? I will remain silent too but I think ten will say more than I can say.