Monday, May 29, 2006

The Silent Visitor Comments

Rating: 4.9

I love her dearly,
And long to tell her how I feel.
For so many years of her life,
I remained silent,
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Dee Daffodil
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Mpho Petrus Manwedi 25 September 2006

This just made me sit and shed a tear. What can I say? I will remain silent too but I think ten will say more than I can say.

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That was a great 1. It actually made me cry too. You rock, from Rissa: -)

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

This is so tear- jerking Beautiful in its nature and I certainly love the theme Bless you for this one Sorry but we only go up to ten on this site Love duncan XXX

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Chuck Audette 30 May 2006

A sweet & loving & wonderful tribute. Liked the POV. -chuck

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Mary Nagy 29 May 2006

Oh my gosh Dee! This gave me such a lump in my throat....(and having my tonsils removed a week and a half ago...that's not a good thing!) What a beautifully sad poem! I sometimes like to think my dad watches me and can see my kids and the life I've made. I hope so. You put into words what so many of us hope for. Beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

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Scarlett Treat 29 May 2006

Beautfully written in loving memory of 'Mom.' I felt my own mother hovering near as I read this one. Thanks, Dee.

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DEE...TIME, DESIRE&OPPORTUNITY WILL ALL TOUCH THE SAME POINT... JUST BE THERE WHEN IT HAPPENS...A MOST BEAUTFUL PIECE INDEED PASSION & YOUR NATURAL GIFT MAKES FOR A SADLY PERFECT READ STELLAR USE OF IMAGERY...SMOOTH RIVER-FLOW FROM PEEK TO VALLEY....NICE WORK DEE! '''''''''FRANK

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