The Silent Tones Of Mumbai Bay.... Comments
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Sylvia, please let me know if my 2-part comment (in addition to this part, of course) does NOT show up. it has not shown up yet in my postings. bri :)
No, it has not shown up till now, perhaps we must wait longer, no? But usually when it does not show up here, in your postings it MUST, otherwise (as I have learned after all the months of having problems) you must write another 2-part. Thank you so much that you sent me an addition, Bri.
i like it but there are some 'things' about it i think i could never understand. it seems a mixture of something very PERSONAL, involving some thought or spirit of a person dear to you, AND a tour of the megacity, Mumbai, formerly Bombay. the last three lines are, as i believe they are for you, some of my favorites. and i like the portrayal of the moon. bri :) ok, to MyPoemList.
Thank you so much for your honest and kind comments, Bri, I prefer the poem remains a kind of mystery for you. You may have your sympathetic conclusions, and almost all poems have such a habit and that makes this poem more interesting. I prefer not to add your questions as shown.
Thank you so much for your attentive and kind comments, Mahtab. I have brought a visit to Mumbai recently and I know there is a ghetto, only I do not write about that, I love to write about beautiful things and Mumbai is a beautiful megacity.
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7/29/2025 9:57:25 PM # 1.0.0
Care and emotive things! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.