Friday, January 8, 2010

The Silent Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside the corridors of my mind
I feel the tight embrace of a friend
An upsetting presence – a haven of solace; an embrace that captures my soul
When poetry becomes the habitation of lies
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Rafael Yaw Kumi
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Rafael Kumi 08 January 2010

Hi Patrick, I wrote this at a time when I had no words left in me to write. It also represents the potential in me just waiting to be birthed

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Patrick Derilus 08 January 2010

This is pretty good, explain exactly what it means to me is it you awakening your true potential or something else?

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