Friday, October 10, 2008

The Silent Lane Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes on that door the silent lane beckons
My fingers scrape that door
Nobody opens it any more
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Rani Turton
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Parina Gujral 14 November 2008

I love the part 'my fingers scrape the door' truly amazingly thought... i am just 13 but seriously your poem it..mkae sme watch time

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Bob Blackwell 11 October 2008

Rani, well written thoughts on our minds torture us. You so right the present is true bliss. Bob

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2008

Right tones created for this poem.........made it sound a real classic......10

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