Thursday, September 27, 2018

The Silent Hall Comments

Rating: 4.5

There is no breeze,
The leaves don't blow.
No flowers dance,
Nor rivers flow.
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Shabeeh Haider
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

A well depiction on sad love has been made by you astutely. It may be cited.... No buzz of bee, No song of bird. Even your breath, Cannot be heard. Beautiful poem nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Shabeeh Haider 28 September 2018

Thank you for your very kind words. Stay blessed

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