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'The Silencer' Comments

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The Silencer

A silent and sudden passage
Of people known and unknown
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Pushpinder Kaur
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Kenmi 11 August 2020

I like your poem a lot. On how it describes the train station and how you add mysteriousness and fright. please make more.

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Pushpinder Kaur 09 August 2020

The picture of the Seagulls evoke in the mind, the idea of 'gone' as these migratory birds visit the hot regions around October and staying until March, are 'gone' for the rest of the year. Their going and absence is visibly experienced...but they return every year!

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Pushpinder Kaur

Pushpinder Kaur

Amritsar, Punjab, India
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