Wednesday, March 2, 2016

The Silence Within Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gingerly walking down the lane,
Of worn out paths of shrubs & tiny insect's
for a rendezvous with nature
and a little time to think
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2021

Magnificent craftsmanship! Liked it

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2016

the motherly head bow in thought the childish head bow in mischeif the mother's in fruitless hope the daughter's in mindless anticipation....... in fruitless hope, mindless anticipation, thedaily struggles and hunger... very fine poem , . pathetic situation...... thank you dear poet. tony

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Yewande Adedokun 17 April 2016

Today is the day l will say I fell in love with you for poetry sake. descriptive, sinking my mind.

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Chinedu Dike 10 April 2016

Insightful depiction of deplorable condition of hopelessness and wretchedness occasioned by oppressive jungle economy, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Tauhid. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 March 2016

Daily struggles and hunger! But, with the hope ahead. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 02 March 2016

motherly head bow in thought, good one..

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