Wednesday, November 25, 2015

The Silence Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were to whisper in your ear,
My heart-beats would have whisper, ‘Love';
Within, containing every melody and ache,
Torments and tenderness, shivers and delirium;
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Soran M. H 19 June 2020

a poignant piece of work. Very well and nice penned 10/10 and into my fav list

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2018

If it were my eyes to meet your eyes, You would have been looking into my soul; Reaching its depths, and see how much it's hidden; Though tears might have been obstruct my vision, ....nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem on love and silence.

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Saadat Tahir 05 December 2015

Lovely lines... The emotion and stuttering musicality in them waft across the sands of time like a distant flute.. Ululating and puny in the vastness… like a moan a whimper a heartrending lament that speaks volumes in its agonizing notes... liked

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2015

Reaching its depths with the muse of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

Very first line took it to a different level altogether....The sound of love is amazing. the imagery is wonderful and the sensual part is outstanding, I may find it difficult to express my true feelings about this poem.....100 on 10.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 November 2015

'For there is no utterance of words, When sighs proves loud in silence.' is very nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Reed 25 November 2015

Silence sometimes speaks louder than words. Thanks for sharing.

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