If I were to whisper in your ear,
My heart-beats would have whisper, ‘Love';
Within, containing every melody and ache,
Torments and tenderness, shivers and delirium;
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If it were my eyes to meet your eyes, You would have been looking into my soul; Reaching its depths, and see how much it's hidden; Though tears might have been obstruct my vision, ....nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem on love and silence.
Lovely lines... The emotion and stuttering musicality in them waft across the sands of time like a distant flute.. Ululating and puny in the vastness… like a moan a whimper a heartrending lament that speaks volumes in its agonizing notes... liked
Reaching its depths with the muse of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Very first line took it to a different level altogether....The sound of love is amazing. the imagery is wonderful and the sensual part is outstanding, I may find it difficult to express my true feelings about this poem.....100 on 10.
'For there is no utterance of words, When sighs proves loud in silence.' is very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Silence sometimes speaks louder than words. Thanks for sharing.
a poignant piece of work. Very well and nice penned 10/10 and into my fav list