Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
Tuesday, September 25, 2012

The Silence Of Loneliness Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sees the fear in the sky
The ground indeed not dry
the rhythm of crumbling sea
Sounds no good to me
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Fredoneth Jonelas
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Excellent poem. You may have a 1000 friends and still feel lonely. It comes from your heart and soul and not a pen. Very good piece of spiritualism. May be that language needs brushes. I loved it. Thanks for reference.

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Eric Cockrell 29 September 2012

alone... exploring the path of the unchained self!

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

a great piece of poetry, deep meaning a great job

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!

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D H 28 September 2012

Your poem structure has a AABB CCDC etc. Format. Nice style and rhyme scheme, along with the poem itself and your personal views on loneliness. ALONE..... As a trade please read my poem Never Meant to Belong - The meaning of a fading life and memory

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate it a lot.

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

Very good write, and I can relate to the loneliness! I love it! Thanks for sharing!

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Words' Knight 28 September 2012

This poem showed me clearly that you are a prisoner of loneliness, yet I advice to look for good friends, and you won't be suffering due to loneliness again.Moreover this poem contain deep, honest feelings, well done, and expressed thoughts.thank you.

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Persian Khushi 28 September 2012

I gave you 10! excellent writing.

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Simon Odhiambo 28 September 2012

Lonliness and being alone...quite different aspects. thats why even echoing wind sounds scary. well written.

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Loneliness is sometimes killing and the facts are well established through your poetry..well done

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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