Sees the fear in the sky
The ground indeed not dry
the rhythm of crumbling sea
Sounds no good to me
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Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!
Another great poem rich in it's meaning. Terriffic job well done!
Your poem structure has a AABB CCDC etc. Format. Nice style and rhyme scheme, along with the poem itself and your personal views on loneliness. ALONE..... As a trade please read my poem Never Meant to Belong - The meaning of a fading life and memory
Very good write, and I can relate to the loneliness! I love it! Thanks for sharing!
This poem showed me clearly that you are a prisoner of loneliness, yet I advice to look for good friends, and you won't be suffering due to loneliness again.Moreover this poem contain deep, honest feelings, well done, and expressed thoughts.thank you.
Lonliness and being alone...quite different aspects. thats why even echoing wind sounds scary. well written.
Loneliness is sometimes killing and the facts are well established through your poetry..well done
Excellent poem. You may have a 1000 friends and still feel lonely. It comes from your heart and soul and not a pen. Very good piece of spiritualism. May be that language needs brushes. I loved it. Thanks for reference.