Salman, a very touching piece. I would advise looking at the last four lines again to get a smoother flow in the Fourth and third last especially since the last two are quite powerful.
Warm regards,
Margery.
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Salman, a very touching piece. I would advise looking at the last four lines again to get a smoother flow in the Fourth and third last especially since the last two are quite powerful. Warm regards, Margery.