Monday, October 8, 2007

The Silence After The Whispers Comments

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He never professed, to be a friend;
He only made felt, of his friendship:
He never said a word,
He only whispered in the ear,
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Margery Rehman 21 November 2007

Salman, a very touching piece. I would advise looking at the last four lines again to get a smoother flow in the Fourth and third last especially since the last two are quite powerful. Warm regards, Margery.

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