*the Silence* Comments

I love this poem because it sadly reminds me of my family ;) . Most of us are quite silent and life truly feels insipid are barren at those times, although I myself am quiescent by nature, so a bit of irony here. But no, seriously, I think that ring of moroseness makes it quite beautiful, and it stops me from forgetting that poetry is more than a few witty rhymes thrown together. You know if you ever tire of these short pieces (which mind you are very good) , you should try a hand at some short stories, they're good for putting more substance into your ideas. Btw I found this awesome poem a day or two ago by Lerryn Warren, 'My flower'.