I see him as the signalman
On the unseen tracks of time
A family priest for all of us-
As we travel down the line.
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What a wonderful and wise poem, full of lovely flowing lines and imagery and great use of metaphor. Very nice indeed. 10
Fantastic imagery with the wisdom engraved on it. Time can not erase out such spells a poet carved on it. Along the unseen tracks of time The signalman simply utters with commitment to keep the human civilisation exist for long run ''Lord we are restless'' ''Until we rest with Thee''. A real tribute by heart to a person whose spirit never dies. Metaphors are also great...... As we are travelling down the line, the signalman perhaps always stands beside us to show the necessary turn to move. Universal your writing touches the reader by heart. Thank you much.............10++++++ Regards, pranab
Nice, nice poem..so thoughtful and pleasant to read. Constance