Monday, April 6, 2009
The Sickness Comments
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The sickness finds us.
We try to run,
we try to hide,
but it always finds us.
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Debra Kemper
13 April 2009
Nice one! I wasn't sure where you were going, so the end surprised me. Cool! That is what poets are supposed to do!
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7/27/2025 10:10:28 AM # 1.0.0
Aside from the 'Down the Sickness' song in my head now, this is a great poem. 'try to run, hide, it always finds us', this sense of urgency is awesome. Your idea to portray jealousy as a sickness is inspired. Double plus awesome-y.