Wednesday, January 2, 2019

The Sick Lady In My Bedroom Comments

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In a loose dress she is lying on her bed
Waking in the lengthy cold winter night
Starring at the ceiling fan over her head
Recollecting nights when stars were bright
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 January 2019

Liked the third paragraph. Beautiful lines that are highly imaginative. They capture the nature of reciprocity in love. A great poem beautifully written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 January 2019

A wonderful poem of love and life. Romantic and touching. Love begets love. It is a process of production. The more you put into it, the more we feel secured. And in time it is most needed, we can count on it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 January 2019

After a a painful rescue a smile comes. This provokes thought bit fills mind in emotion. An amazing poem of love and life is beautifully penned.

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M Asim Nehal 02 January 2019

Awesome poem, Janab, I quote: But she has investments in the bank of sky Love's romance at the start but is the best To invest, it's a hot blanket with double ply, The investor gets it back with the interest.

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 January 2019

A wonderful write, a touching poem.

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