I shared your poem on my Facebook. I find the writing very touching and well done. I want that magic shovel in my heart... Not figuratively, but for real! ! I've written and read many poems about gardening and you captured one of the reasons that people garden and made it into a beautiful metaphor. Such a tangible implement, a shovel makes your writing about abstract concepts (sadness, heartbreak, love, hope) very concrete and tangible. And then the last two lines pull the poem together beautifully. This is a special poem.
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I shared your poem on my Facebook. I find the writing very touching and well done. I want that magic shovel in my heart... Not figuratively, but for real! ! I've written and read many poems about gardening and you captured one of the reasons that people garden and made it into a beautiful metaphor. Such a tangible implement, a shovel makes your writing about abstract concepts (sadness, heartbreak, love, hope) very concrete and tangible. And then the last two lines pull the poem together beautifully. This is a special poem.
Thanks Pam, you are breathing life into my poems and i love it. Thank you very much for your inspirational comment, i am humbled.