Sunday, October 19, 2014

The Shortest Epic. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Big bang!
In void's lab did happen
Such an awful explosion;
So is it fixed in human.
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Tajudeen Shah
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I would rather not 06 February 2020

Why is this called the shortest epic?

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2016

Explosion! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpinder Kaur 15 July 2016

A thought provoking poem and beautiful rhymes.

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Valsa George 04 November 2014

Starting with Big Bang and ending in God, man's epic journey is completed! Enjoyed these triplets, especially the one on Time !

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 October 2014

Beautifully defined each Epic in Short, The shortest Epic...I loved each one of them. Very true said in poetic notes. origin is the end, end is the origin. is it so? One can see neither origin nor end, I feel we entered the world in between, so we couldn't catch up with neither ending nor beginning and we will be leaving in between. So we won't be able to see the other end. It's really a thoughtful write and each carries an in depth meaning. Your each writes are quite interesting. I loved reading it and Thanks for sharing with us.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 24 October 2014

The shortest epic having lost the seat blessed. Very nice writing. Nice expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Interesting definitions, liked it..................

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Shakil Ahmed 19 October 2014

nice poem i like it. please read some of my poems and give your comment. thank you

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