Thursday, May 31, 2018

The Short Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bails had come falling down
The stumps begin to light
The batsman will look behind
To have a terrible fright
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savina liyanage
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Don''t Be Fooled 31 May 2018

Judith Blatherwick assumed this identity as she has with about 50 others on this site.Why she does it only she knows. She is 64 years old and lives with her dog in Garvald UK.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 31 May 2018

At 12 yrs this is wonderful stuff, Savi. Beautifully crafted poem indeed. I am proud of you, darling. Full marks from me.

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Do you play cricket or does it play you?

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Savina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 May 2018

The stumps begin to light and the batsman has looked behind. Cricket has attracted attention of many from olden days. Before expectation night has ended and light is originated. An amazing sharing is done here. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned.10

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