Monday, January 8, 2007

The Short Life Of Love Comments

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I can’t describe the trepidation that I felt
The words pouring from your lips were cause for my heart to melt
Showering attentions and affections day and night
You were seated on the pedestal reserved for Mr Right
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Paula Robinson
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Petra Creffield 13 January 2007

fantastic tragedy of ill fated love - fab read :) P

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Jim Foulk 08 January 2007

very well worded, nice poem, the words you used were a Gem. keep writing

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Paula Robinson

Paula Robinson

Stafford, England
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