Thursday, November 19, 2020

The Shoe On The Wrong Foot Comments

Rating: 4.7

Just because you can
doesn't mean you should
Can you walk right
when your shoe is on the wrong foot?
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Yiyan Han 21 November 2020

A good point is made in a few lines :)

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Aqua Flower 24 November 2020

I am glad you got the message. Thank you for your reply.

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Carl Roussell 21 November 2020

Few words that say a lot. Excellent write! ! !

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Aqua Flower 06 December 2020

I always like small poems that make an impact. I'm glad this one did!

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Kostas Lagos 20 November 2020

Loved this one! Splendid!

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Aqua Flower 06 December 2020

Thank you. I am so glad you liked it!

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Amir Marandi 19 November 2020

Brilliant. Short and straight to the point.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

A wonderful little poem. Just four lines, but the message is so clear!

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Aqua Flower 06 December 2020

Hi Khairul! Sometimes the thoughts on those short poems just pop in your head and they make sense. I love writing the small poems with a big message. Glad you liked it!

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