The Shoe Lace Comments

YOU MAY thank your teacher for me. i like it very much! there may be a typo or two. i like where you put on on a line by itself. in fact i especially liked the whole second half of your poem. nice work; ; i hope you got a good grade. too bad, in a way, that some students are resistant to or unable to perform well in a rigid setting. thanks for sharing. i dabble in humor (and other things) . i have my titles preceded, on poemhunter, by words that describe somewhat the subjects i am writing about.